
I addressed the audience of Anthem through the colours, images and language used on the front page, contents page and feature article. The style of writing is encouraging and mature but not too sophisticated for 16-18 year old indie fans, while the colour scheme is black, white and red, which means that it loses a hint of professionalism, but gains a sense of security for the readers that this magazine is for them.

Then, the images show a young musician who is within the chosen age range for the magazine, so the readers will feel comfortable reading it. Other images of the artists found in the magazine include "Pause", a male duo and "Jocelyn", another female solo artist.
The use of Pause encourages male readers to pick up the magazine and read it as they know that it's okay for them to read it, regardless of the gender of the artist on the front cover, while the use of another female artist also encourages more females to read Anthem.
Why My Front Cover Appeals to My Target Audience
Why My Contents Page Appeals to My Target Audience
Why My Feature Article Appeals to My Target Audience
My new pages are more appealing to my target audience than before now that they have been remodeled.
Before, the colours didn't stand out enough and the text on the feature article was in two big blocks - something my target audience said that they disliked the most about physical interviews. As well as this, there weren't many pictures on the pages, and the font wasn't professional enough.
I addressed these mistakes and, when going over my pages, re-shot my pictures so they would be more appealing to my target audience.

My front cover is an improvement as it holds more conventions of a real magazine - it has various titles spread out on the page to inform the reader that there is more to this issue of Anthem then just the artist on the front cover.
As well as this, it includes factors that they would typically be interested in, e.g. free posters, opinions of their rock-star idols and general news about their preferred artist.
Finally, there's more colour, but not so much that it's overwhelming and/or difficult to look at. It stands out enough to capture the reader's attention and is a good enough font to read it clearly.

Then, my contents page is more appealing than my previous version as there's more to it - there's more variety of music for the readers who, typically are extremely interested in every aspect of reading, to read about.
Each key section of the magazine is clearly divided up on the right side of the page using bold colours and fonts, whereas a "band list" is on the left side of the page so the reader is able to navigate their way around the magazine and easily find an article about their preferred artist.
An opportunity for the readers to subscribe and save money is clearly advertised in the bottom right corner, which is a common convention found in any genre of magazine, sitting next to an editor's note. Most readers of magazines enjoy reading editor's notes before they continue on reading, so by having that there, it reassures my target audience that some things don't change every issue, such as the editor's note segment.
With my new pages, I feel that they are more appealing to my target audience as they're more colourful, have more conventions of existing and attractive magazines, e.g. NME, Q, and could come across as a magazine for students in their late teens/early 20s.
This can be seen through the coloured titled on the feature article, clearly dividing up the questions and answers for the reader to deduct between the two.
As well as this, the text only takes up just over half the page, whereas before, it took up almost all of the page in one, big block of unattractive text for the reader. The pull quote in the middle of the text also splits it up a bit more, so the reader can have a break.